I really liked it. Gave me legit One Piece vibes with the mix of seriousness and goofiness. I enjoyed how you overcame the final battle by using your wittiness. And it was a great showcase of willpower to overcome the skill gap between you and a trying Saccharine. Finally, something somewhat small but large in my eyes is how certain characters can see the goodness in you. And that is enough to warrant a optional of a innate trait. You can either go with both, or neither.
Kind eyes : No matter what you say or do your eyes can't hide the internal struggle you have in your actions. Bonus to Relation scores at the end of threads when dealing with Marines, Civilians, and Revolutionaries. Soft Skin: Certain actions have caused a rumor to form in the Underworld that you may get too attached to certain jobs. Payment for Underworld deeds are typically lower when dealing with Lips, Hands, and Arms.
NPC Information Current Relationship --> New Relationship I will also explain, briefly, my increase or decrease reasoning. Along with other details for when the INPC is encountered again.
Lord La 55-->50
Staying along after the job is done, even with Soden playing along, is a cause for suspicion. Not much since you haven't failed before but suspicion nonetheless. Actions and things you say will be looked at more deeply; which will cause a more drastic decrease in relation.
Meyye Cheihine 66 --> 70
More would've been gained if Meyye played more in a role in the story. But the moment you shared was enough for a reasonable increase.
Trick Saccharine 40 --> 35
The defeat was fair; but failure on Saccharine's part has gain him great scrutiny. His position in the 61st branch in threatened and he has been assigned Cipher Pol agent to help in recovering Murray G. Soden. What Saccharine personally has taken away from the experience is his shortcomings in combat. His S&P along with P&W have increased by +1,000 Doriki respectfully.
