Post by Rigel Larrat on Jul 4, 2020 15:09:38 GMT -8
Name: Gress Ruins Invasion Type: Event Episode Requestee: Zebediah Winch Difficulty: 2 Significance: 2 Objective: Defend the Gress Ruins from the revolutionaries. Sub-Objective: Explore the ruins and meet the native Shandorians. Plot: Special materials have been rumored to exist inside the ruins of a stone village the natives call Gress. Revolutionaries are eager to mine these materials for their crusade against the World Government, but have found resistance in the Shandorians. Rigel hopes to learn more about the island, with Melissa, from its natives, and looks eager to defend their home from the invading revolutionaries. Wishlist: High Significance Info Shandorian Relations Cast: PCs: Rigel Larrat, Melissa Devaroux NPCs: Shandorian Shaman Ganon, Shandorian Shaman Pachwua, Shandorian Guardian Nova
Revolutionary Captain, Taylor Moss Revolutionary Lieutenant, Cabra Pteromyn Revolutionary Lieutenant, Ko Pantino
Feats: Melissa has begun to feel the water within an enemys body Water + affinity.
Endurance and Durability: She's showing she can be a bit of a tank.
Her ability to use water is becoming more fluid.
Conclusion: Melissa has become more sure of herself, she's much more willing to kill if needed and the contrast between her and Rigel shows this. She's smarter than before, able to identify core issues and try to think of ways to quell them.
Wishlist: Mid sig info + Shandorian Relations + Rev Relations
Desired: 6k + Doriki
Rigel
Link: (Link to the thread) Feats: New Age Visionary Trait Feat: Brokered peace to the conflicting groups of the thread Perception & Wits Attribute Feat: Sensed an enemy NPC attack while blinded Star Link Combat Proficiency Trait Feat: Combined stances that aren't normally used in combination Conclusion: Rigel is more familiar with the Shandorian culture. The Revolutionaries and natives on Yoruba now have an amicable relationship. Wishlist: Mid Significance Info, +Relations to Shandorians Desired: +6K Doriki Earned
Post by World Boss on Jul 24, 2020 15:08:15 GMT -8
Not sure why the Shandians are being played so friendly given their island is being invaded by a bunch of randoms (including you guys). This the 2nd task of you guys i've graded and am scratching my head at, because the event prompt gives a totally different impression on the attitude of the natives. Think of canon Skypiea how Waipa and his crew treated the Strawhats.
The main note i have is a kind of inconsistency right off the bat with Nova randomly attacking you guys while in an unexplained injured state.(hostile) Then Ganon being cool with you guys (non-hostile) to the point he leads y'all to a medic camp, when he could have just took Nova himself. There was no need for you guys' help. I understand there's always something that needs to happen to get our foot in the door for the sake of the plot, but from a reader's perspective it was odd and poorly done. Make sure you guys put your heads together to come up with plausible reasoning for things, cause that inconsistency easily blows a hole in the entire task and makes it seem like y'all cheat coded yourself into good standings.
The content beyond this was executed well enough to earn your wishlist items. I appreciated the flow and transitions from scene to scene with the fighting eventually deescalating to talking and the dialogue of said talking, but deffo minus points for this cuz i know u guys can do better, especially Melissa.
Melissa Assigned Major Damage that has received First Aid to your character. Recovery will be finished in a week, but given the task was concluded more than a week ago, you get off the hook and are considered recovered. Relation Score of 55 with all Indigenous people of Yoruba (considering the other task) Denying positive Relations with Revs. 35 Relation Score with Ko. Claim of Mid Significant Info is approved, but can only be gifted IC upon reaching the Azure Altar Your character was effective in the topic with both talking and combat, but didn't really see anything special, but i enjoy the humor you keep steady in the topic. You're not afraid to go into the weird pocket. Work on really bringing in some more momentum leading to those Feat moments for your Traits, though. It was a good attempt, but I don't see much other than water sword and water bullet from you. Really sell me on a closer relationship with water in your next topic. 6k Doriki
Rigel (you can post your own task completion template in the future) Assigned moderate damage, but you're healed by now Community Relation score of 55 with all Indigenous people of Yoruba as well Claim of Mid Significant Info is approved, but can only be gifted IC upon reaching the Azure Altar Your character was also effective in and out of combat and I can see he's got heart, which was nice to see glimmers of here and there. Good overcoming of blindness. 6.5k Doriki.
Taking 3 NPC Coins for the Taylor Moss Encounter since she is a High Diff. that's not apart of your Team. Mel has 0 coins, so this one's on Condor
Last Edit: Jul 24, 2020 15:10:13 GMT -8 by World Boss
