APPEARANCE Purge is a 6ft tall young lad, with a very well built body, with all his muscules being strengthern through hard work, and toned through the chores of life. Despite being physicall in great shape and the shape of muscules clearly showing he is still quite avaerage in size. He has white hair, slightly pale skin, and can often be seen wearing a dark blue jacket. Carries their sword on thethe lower side of the back instead of their hip.
PERSONALITY
PERSONALITY
Purge is a very forward thinking idividual seeing things for what they are, and people for people. It isn't until someone opens their mouth or does somethign stupid that they truelyl gain Purge Evians attention. Purge is someone who often keeps to themselvs and while they have no issue socialising unless its to get involved in some sort of gaming expereince, to make money or to develop their skills they generally don't seek it out. They don't drink alchole or digest something they feel would inflict harm to their body, even chocolate puts them off a bite.
Their speech is often somewhat well spoken however, they do tend to use allot of slang words. as if they want to sound more professional and mature but have never acturally been taught.
• Corruption • Losing • Sharks • Flying insects that make noise • World Goverment
MISC
• Competative • Purpose Driven •Good person but has a somewhat bent moral compass.
PAST & FUTURE
FUTURE
A yonko ruling over a peaceful nation that pokes its nose into other buisness for gaming, removing corruption, and money making oppertunities.
DREAM/GOAL: To become someone in a position of power to develop the world, not just themselves.
HOME ISLAND
Sorbet Kingdom
HISTORY
Early Years _
Purge Evian was born at sea on a small raft during the final moments of his parents' lives. As his parents had been stranded at sea with only a sacred family sword known as the KantoMissYah, a notepad that had been passed down throughout the family.”The family of Evian” and the small raffed that Dwayne had pushed for 3 days carrying his pregnant wife in hope of reaching shore. Purge's mother was a wearer of the name Erza Evian, while his Father was a wearer of the name Dwayne Evian. The family of Evian is that of a long lineage of swordsmen who are often connected with the ocean in some way or another, as if it was their friend. Blades seem to ignore the resistance of water and have even been noted to manipulate it, or target it within the bodies of others, somewhat similar to the fishman karate/ or fishman jutsu however it is indeed its own thing. While members of the family were naturally connected to this style it was recorded within the notebook that Dwayne Evian had on his person as it still required effort to master and make one's own. Both Erza and Dwayne had not eaten anything for 3 days and had been forced to drink the ocean water to maintain their strength for the child within Erzz the child that would be known as Purge...Purge Evian. It was thanks to their unique connection to the water that allowed them to get this far however, in the moments of Purge's birth Erza would die almost instantly. With the birth of his son and death of his wife Dwayne was impacted with a massive flood of emotions both of extreme heights and extreme depths. This strain on his heart would cause his focus to sway and ultimately lead to his own death, however, he did manage to push the raft far enough to reach the nearby waters of the Sorbet Kingdom before finally sinking into the ocean with a single last word. Purge. Note: Erza was on the raft in her moments of death but for some reason was not on the raft after this moment [Anime logic].
Purge was then left alone on the raft with the notebook, the sword and an echo on the wind containing the words “Purge Evian” as if the ocean was carrying the name to pass it forward. Luckily for Purge he was saved by a young fisherman of the name “Silly Billy” the Whale Snatcher. Almost instantly Billy understood the situation that this baby had no one else in the world, he was clearly of a relevant birth and based on the notepad, the sword and the voice he heard on the wind a very important child. Billy Hooked the raft onto his rowboat and would proceed to transport the Child, the book and the Sword onto his fishing boat; pausing only for a moment to read the title off the notebook which seemed to have an engraving “Purge. W Evian”. Billy would gaze back towards the baby “I guess that will be your name, Purge of the Water Evian or Purge W Evian for short”. Billy would row back to shore as he had accepted the responsibility of raising this child as his own.
Silly Billy was part of a fishing group that was incharge of all of the fishing exports of sorbet kingdom and while he never accepted the percent of all trade the group conducted that he was entitled he did alright for himself. He had the spirit of a pirate but was un-naturally loyal to the sorbet kingdom and as such never did leave, but he did get himself in quite a bit of trouble. Billy took part in a range of suspicious activities from Haglering, thief, illegal poker games, mercenary jobs and even clashed with the navy/world government during his time.
---------- Purge Training as a fisherman / Swordsman : 0 to 10------------
Almost as soon as Purge knew how to walk Billy had placed a fishing rod in his hand and begun teaching him the ways of the ocean, how to use each of his muscle groups, how to stand firm when even the ground beneath one's feet was fluid. The training was intense and the time he spent with Silly Billy was valued and did show results, with the first major accomplishment being during Purge’s 3rd year of life when he caught his first fish. It was a large catfish that put up quite the fight during its capture requiring Purge to use every drop of strength he had in his young child's body. At the age of four Billy finally put the sword in Purge’s hands forcing him to hold it two handed despite Purge being destined to wield it with one hand in the future. Being an Evian, Purge quickly adapted to the sword with ease swinging it with grace and precision, however, there was something more to his natural connection with the blade. when he finally gripped the hilt of the “KantoMissYah” Purge could hear the ocean as if putting a seashell to their ear. This unique style was called the “Shōri wa kyūsokuna sutoraiki de ochiru”or “Shokyū iru” for short. Billy was also a master of swordsmanship and would be able to teach Purge a vast amount of styles with the blade which would include the ability to cut fire in half, how to ignore the natural resistance water created, and how to slash a fish underwater without cutting the animal resulting in a perfect catch.
While Purge's life as a child lacked that of a regular kid, lacking any sort of childhood like activities as he simply worked, trained and spent time with his step-father Billy he was indeed happy. By the age of 6 he was a capable fisherman able to go out on his own and return with a full harvest without issue, in fact he was trained well in the art of fishing and swordsmanship; he was able to injure a very small seaking with a ranged attack causing the beast to flee. Purge would maintain his training, and fishing over the course of the next 4 years, merging them both to improve himself to one excellent in both with Billy as his teacher and his parents notebook as his guide. He would even be approached as a swordsman to teach those younger than himself by several families within the Sorbet kingdom, it had become clear to those around that his skills were quite develop and his maturity was above those of a train marine officer making him the ideal teacher for those avoiding a political bias for their children. Billy supported him under the condition that he did not teach them Shokyu Iru as there's no better way to cement one's skills than teaching another, but Shokyu Iru was for Purge and Purge alone. Purge respected Billy and proceeded under his advice making use of the respect the local community had for him and the extra cash it supplied him.
During Purge’s 10th year of life their was quite a bad incident which would lead to the execution of Silly BIlly the Whale Snatcher, as a marine emptied his clip into the the skull of Silly Billy as he contain against a wall, with a giant metal pole going through his shoulder. Purge did try to save his step-father and battled a marine Lieutenant Junior Grade, a subordinate to a Commodore, the same Commodore who killed his stepfather. The battle would last for 3 hours as the two crossed swords with intense resolve. One looking to save the most important person in his life, the other looking to prove he is indeed a true warrior of justice. The fight would result in a decent amount of the area damaged as both focused on mobility. powerful sword strikes and using their surroundings; in fact the Lieutenant Junior Gradewas even able to deflect the ranged sword strikes that purge unleashed on him in rapid succession. *The Commodore would suddenly appear between the two and karate chop them both knocking them out* he would pick up the Lieutenant Junior Grade and begin to walk away “I’m sorry young one, but your step-father needed to die, however, i will respect his dying wish and ignore this transgression against the navy.”
And with that the marines would leave the area, taking the corpse of silly billy with them. Lieutenant Junior Grade:“Sir, why did you ignore the Boy who attempted to fight us, he attacked the Navy he should be punished” the commodore would look at his subordinate with disappointment “Don’t you think the death of his step-father was punishment enough” “That is an independent event, and i have seen you arrest people suffering far more tragic fates before?” “Hmmm Hmm maybe you're right, if i’m honest It’s because i sensed no malis or hatred towards you or me despite us being the reason his step-father is dead i wanted to see where such a tree grows” “So he's an experiment?”“Hmmmm Hmmm” “Did you just fall asleep!” “Hmmm Hmm”.
11 to present.
While it would take some time for purge to truly find himself, he never really lost a grip of himself as he continued to train diving more into the notebook he had to learn more about swordsmanship, he still fished for an income, however, this wasn’t required as the group that he was apart of through silly billy all agreed to give Purge the same percentage of all the groups profits as they did to Billy and while Silly Billy refused, they wouldn’t let purge turn down the offer. Additionally he maintained the teaching he conducted of the students he had gained from local families, and without noticing Purge would have developed a significant amount of beli as an income which would become the catalyst to Purge W Evian taking to the seas.
There was one more serious incident for Purge W Evian when a bounty hunter was chasing a cute blonde near the ports, Purge wasn’t exactly someone to be moved by a pretty face, but she had recently purchased a fish from him and as such he felt somewhat responsible for her as a customer and thus he would stick out his leg. The Bounty Hunter Uber Beats would trip over and face plant into the ground triggering a massive giggle from those around including the young lass. Purge simply returned to moving a few boxes and his everyday life, “Thank you Sir, if you ever find yourself traveling the oceans..hit me up”. The blonde would say before making her departure. Uber Beats would stand up and engage in combat with only to be defeated in a comedic manor despite having a devil fruit, he was no match for Purge who until this point didn't know what a devil fruit was.
[*]Purge has also won several sword tournaments [*]Learned to cut something underwater without disturbing the ocean surface [*]How to surf [*]developed a unique fighting style outside of his shōri wa kyūsokuna sutoraiki de ochiru which involved duel wielding his sword and a fishing rod. But this was mainly to annoy those who didn't know how to fight. Purge is now a 16-year-old swordsman with a knack for getting into trouble while avoiding it at the same time, his current goal is to set out his plan for the future, but he is unsure what he wants from life.
Background & Description: Left with only 2 things of his bilogical family [A sword and a notebook with the teachings of their unique swordsmanship. Taught fishing and swordsmanship form such a young age. Not to mention being naturally gifted due to his biological family.
Combat Potential: Ranged Sword attacks, able to cut both fire and water. Strength and Speed
Non-Combat Potential: Fishing with a sword, carving things up perfectly, and teaching.
SALARY
Source: percentange of the fisherman gorups profits, and payment from parents letting their kids be taught in the way of the sword by Purge/
4,000,000 Beli per year
Rank: D
Description: Being part of the fisherman group, and teaching swordsmanship
Qualifications: Raised in the field since very young
Start Date: 13 years.
TRAITS
Trait Name: Brutish Type: Exclusive Details:+4,500 Strength & Power Doriki
Train Name :Powership Type: Characther Details: When using a sword the chracther is able to generate streangth through a strong swing
Trait Name : Sprinter Type: Characther Details : Character is well known for their running speed. This allows them to generate Speed & Agility Advantages when running/dashing.
Trait name :Flying Slash: Type : Job Detail : By swinging the sword with sufficient force and speed, this creates a powerful pressure in the form of a compressed air blade, allowing the swordsman to cut things from a distance.
ITEMS
Name: - KantoMissYah Type: (Sword) Class: (Skillful Background: (One of the only items, on the raft that my parents died on during my birth as i was taken to sorbet)
N/A
GROUP
Name: Fisherman Group Faction: Independant Leader: Fisherman Bob Background: Silly Billy was a member when he found and took Purge in and as such Purge joined by default and has somewhat become part of their famiily.
END
STARTING VALUES
Beli: 25.000.000 Bounty:0 Doriki: 35.000 Primary Attributes: Strength and Power Position: Newbie Pirate
Post by Rigel Larrat on Jul 7, 2020 16:57:27 GMT -8
Right now I'd put this app at 18,000,000 Doriki 7,500,000 Beli Skillful Item approved
You can take this grading as is or try to take a pass at editing it. There's an outline of a distinct character in this app, but there are levels of polish and detail missing from your app. If you choose to, I'd suggest adding in more particulars to your character that make them more distinct, or embellish on the missing years in their history.
The things that definitely need to be fixed are the salary of your job, B is far too high for a standard fisherman, and your Air Blade trait would fall under the Flying Slash Trait+ from the trait templates.
Okay updated history if I could get an update to what this is worth now that be great.
In terms of his salary not being worth B. He is getting a percent of the fisherman group's profits. Now in the real world fisherman make good money ranging from £10,000 to £100,000 per year depending on their harvest. Now to my knowledge one-piece is based on the Yen. which would mean I x100 to get Beli. So If i take the lower estimate. £10,000 x 100 = 10,000,000 Beli per Year per fisherman. now I'm going off a 5% percentage. and maybe 50 fishermen. 5% of 10,000,000beli = 500,000. Then x 50 = 25,000,000per year. And he's been getting the percent for 6 years, and working as a fisherman for 16. So using a low ball estimate I would be getting a high ball per year just saying. Note: I know the actual figure was based on overall quality, I just wanted to make it clear. Don't underestimate a fisherman them folks make money. [And don't pay tax].
Post by Rigel Larrat on Jul 8, 2020 18:49:18 GMT -8
This history is way more fleshed out. It has more life and character. I think it's a much stronger sense of character. My only gripe is in your encounter with a marine captain. I can't have this character fighting a marine captain to a deadlock at age ten. Please lower that marines rank to be an ensign or below. If you wanna find a workaround to that, feel free to DM me on Discord and we'll work out a compromise.
Make that change, tag me, and I'll approve this app for
24,000 Doriki 13,000,000 Beli D-Rank Salary at 4,000,000 Beli (your logic is sound, but I'm not having a starting character with a common job making that much. The world of One Piece is analogous to ours, but not identical) Skillful item approved
