PROFICIENCY TRAITSTrait Name:“Shōri wa kyūsokuna sutoraiki de ochiru”or “Shokyū iru”
The Basics -Disturpence
Type:Job
Origin: Purge family blood, rigorous training, the notebook and dedication of life [See backstory] Description: Shokyū iru is a fighting style based around the use of a singular sword and a tunage with nature. The nature tunage does have a biased towards the water and the ocean however it is a bit more complicated than this. An outside could make similarities between this style and Fishman karate/Fishman; jujutsu but it is indeed its own thing. Very compatible with other sword Traits and Fishman Karate.
When using this style one can hear the ocean within their ears even if they are miles away from the ocean, as if seashells were being held against their eats [This does not affect their general hearing]. The bit above is just Shokyu in general, only the bit below is relevant to what this specific trait can do.
The Basics Disturpence Branch: This is about using a single blade through Shokyū iru, to cut ones target without even Disturbing whats between. Such as a fish underwater without disturbing the ocean's surface. The user must be able to actually cut clean through something before they can cut what's behind without cutting without disturbance, regardless of level.
Levels:; Level 1 -; Is able to strike passed Brush, leaves or the ocean surface and strike a target without disturpance. "Some Swordsman are able to Cut nothing". Level 2- Is able to strike passed a red flame, cloth or piles of human waste and strike a target without disturpance. Level 3- Is able to strike passed thicker constructs of water and target internal organs without disturpance. Level 4. Is now able to strike passed a crowd of people and strike a target without disturpance. Level 5. Strikes will pass through thick and powerful materialswithout disturbance as they strike their target.
Name: Shokyū iru Waterfall; Tier: Basic Range: Close Description: Shokyū iru Waterfall is a quick draw skill designed to quickly draw one sword from a passive stance to rapidly draw one sword from its shealth and strike without disturbance. Origionally developed to catch fish unawares underwater without causing alarm to the fish around by breaking the water surface. Destruction Range: Small Duration: Instant Base Stats: +10% Speed&Agility Key Traits: Shokyū iru -;The Basics -Disturpence
[b]Name:[/b] Shokyū iru Waterfall [b]Tier:[/b] Basic [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Description:[/b] Shokyū iru Waterfall is a quick draw skill designed to quickly draw one sword from a passive stance to rapidly draw one sword from its sheath and strike without disturbance. Originally developed to catch fish unawares underwater without causing alarm to the fish around by breaking the water surface. [b]Destruction Range:[/b] Small [b]Duration:[/b] Instant [b]Base Stats:[/b] +10% Speed&Agility [b]Key Traits:[/b] Shokyū iru - The Basics -Disturpence
Tier: Basic Range:Self Description: Avodience step was developed through life on the ocean of a rocky fishing boat while trying to fish. The user will move out of the way of all incoming sword strikes, their sword must be sheathed. Destruction Range: N/a Duration: Upkeep Base Stats: 10% + speed&Agility Key Traits: N/a
[b]Name:[/b] Avoidence Step [div align="center"][img]https://i.pinimg.com/originals/37/12/a2/3712a2d62a7dc8412b74e09cc3f3c8dc.gif[/img][/div] [b]Tier:[/b] Basic [b]Range:[/b]Self [b]Description:[/b] Avodience step was developed through life on the ocean of a rocky fishing boat while trying to fish. The user will move out of the way of all incoming sword strikes, their sword must be sheathed. [b]Destruction Range:[/b] N/a [b]Duration:[/b] Upkeep [b]Base Stats:[/b] 10% + speed&Agility [b]Key Traits:[/b] N/a
Tier: Basic Range: Close Description: The user strikes forward once and continues its momentum around themselves for full 360-degree coverage before striking forward a second time. The attack is a powerful one that can hit multiple targets, however, will not disturb Tides, rain or similar things it passes through, however, those nearby will feel a slight wind pressure.
Developed when Purge was standing in the middle of a storm during a training mission, he needed to hit 6 rocks thrown up by his teacher without breaking the water around them. Destruction Range: Small Duration: Instant Base Stats: 10% first spin,+20% on final strike. Strength and Power Key Traits: Shokyū iru
[b]Name:[/b] Aisutōmu [div align="center"][img]https://3.bp.blogspot.com/-V7cvrMkUOA4/W_IyGYzsvCI/AAAAAAABYLk/KKg2f1rHudQrIooWc3HAF8NJ2o8BVv51wCKgBGAs/s1600/Omake%2BGif%2BAnime%2B-%2BSword%2BArt%2BOnline%2B-%2BAlicization%2B-%2BEpisode%2B7%2B-%2BLiena%2BSwings%2BSword.gif[/img][/div] [b]Tier:[/b] Basic [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Description:[/b] The user strikes forward once and continues its momentum around themselves for full 360-degree coverage before striking forward a second time. The attack is a powerful one that can hit multiple targets, however, will not disturb Tides, rain or similar things it passes through, however, those nearby will feel a slight wind pressure.
Developed when Purge was standing in the middle of a storm during a training mission, he needed to hit 6 rocks thrown up by his teacher without breaking the water around them. [b]Destruction Range:[/b] Small [b]Duration:[/b] Instant [b]Base Stats:[/b]10% first spin,+20% on final strike. Strength and Power [b]Key Traits:[/b] Shokyū iru
PROFICIENCY TRAITSTrait Name:“Shōri wa kyūsokuna sutoraiki de ochiru”or “Shokyū iru”
The Basics -Disturpence
Type:Job
Origin: Purge family blood, rigorous training, the notebook and dedication of life [See backstory] Description: Shokyū iru is a fighting style based around the use of a singular sword and a tunage with nature. The nature tunage does have a biased towards the water and the ocean however it is a bit more complicated than this. An outside could make similarities between this style and Fishman karate/Fishman; jujutsu but it is indeed its own thing. Very compatible with other sword Traits and Fishman Karate.
When using this style one can hear the ocean within their ears even if they are miles away from the ocean, as if seashells were being held against their eats [This does not affect their general hearing]. The bit above is just Shokyu in general, only the bit below is relevant to what this specific trait can do.
The Basics Disturpence Branch: This is about using a single blade through Shokyū iru, to cut ones target without even Disturbing whats between. Such as a fish underwater without disturbing the ocean's surface. The user must be able to actually cut clean through something before they can cut what's behind without cutting without disturbance, regardless of level.
Levels:; Level 1 -; Is able to strike passed Brush, leaves or the ocean surface and strike a target without disturpance. "Some Swordsman are able to Cut nothing". Level 2- Is able to strike passed a red flame, cloth or piles of human waste and strike a target without disturpance. Level 3- Is able to strike passed thicker constructs of water and target internal organs without disturpance. Level 4. Is now able to strike passed a crowd of people and strike a target without disturpance. Level 5. Strikes will pass through thick and powerful materialswithout disturbance as they strike their target.
I believe I understand the style, I like it. I assume cut marks will still show up on the inflicted individual(s). However, at the basic level I will be only able to allow you to do this passed liquids. And remove the Fishman Karate and Fishman Jujutsu portion if anything the style would be compatible with Merman Gujutsu.
Name: Shokyū iru Waterfall; Tier: Basic Range: Close Description: Shokyū iru Waterfall is a quick draw skill designed to quickly draw one sword from a passive stance to rapidly draw one sword from its shealth and strike without disturbance. Origionally developed to catch fish unawares underwater without causing alarm to the fish around by breaking the water surface. Destruction Range: Small Duration: Instant Base Stats: +10% Speed&Agility Key Traits: Shokyū iru -;The Basics -Disturpence
[b]Name:[/b] Shokyū iru Waterfall [b]Tier:[/b] Basic [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Description:[/b] Shokyū iru Waterfall is a quick draw skill designed to quickly draw one sword from a passive stance to rapidly draw one sword from its sheath and strike without disturbance. Originally developed to catch fish unawares underwater without causing alarm to the fish around by breaking the water surface. [b]Destruction Range:[/b] Small [b]Duration:[/b] Instant [b]Base Stats:[/b] +10% Speed&Agility [b]Key Traits:[/b] Shokyū iru - The Basics -Disturpence
Tier: Basic Range:Self Description: Avodience step was developed through life on the ocean of a rocky fishing boat while trying to fish. The user will move out of the way of all incoming sword strikes, their sword must be sheathed. Destruction Range: N/a Duration: Upkeep Base Stats: 10% + speed&Agility Key Traits: N/a
[b]Name:[/b] Avoidence Step [div align="center"][img]https://i.pinimg.com/originals/37/12/a2/3712a2d62a7dc8412b74e09cc3f3c8dc.gif[/img][/div] [b]Tier:[/b] Basic [b]Range:[/b]Self [b]Description:[/b] Avodience step was developed through life on the ocean of a rocky fishing boat while trying to fish. The user will move out of the way of all incoming sword strikes, their sword must be sheathed. [b]Destruction Range:[/b] N/a [b]Duration:[/b] Upkeep [b]Base Stats:[/b] 10% + speed&Agility [b]Key Traits:[/b] N/a
Approved. However, I suggest you add in that it can be used against ANY attacker(s) also. As it stands this move is best used against a opposing swordsman.
Tier: Basic Range: Close Description: The user strikes forward once and continues its momentum around themselves for full 360-degree coverage before striking forward a second time. The attack is a powerful one that can hit multiple targets, however, will not disturb Tides, rain or similar things it passes through, however, those nearby will feel a slight wind pressure.
Developed when Purge was standing in the middle of a storm during a training mission, he needed to hit 6 rocks thrown up by his teacher without breaking the water around them. Destruction Range: Small Duration: Instant Base Stats: 10% first spin,+20% on final strike. Strength and Power Key Traits: Shokyū iru
[b]Name:[/b] Aisutōmu [div align="center"][img]https://3.bp.blogspot.com/-V7cvrMkUOA4/W_IyGYzsvCI/AAAAAAABYLk/KKg2f1rHudQrIooWc3HAF8NJ2o8BVv51wCKgBGAs/s1600/Omake%2BGif%2BAnime%2B-%2BSword%2BArt%2BOnline%2B-%2BAlicization%2B-%2BEpisode%2B7%2B-%2BLiena%2BSwings%2BSword.gif[/img][/div] [b]Tier:[/b] Basic [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Description:[/b] The user strikes forward once and continues its momentum around themselves for full 360-degree coverage before striking forward a second time. The attack is a powerful one that can hit multiple targets, however, will not disturb Tides, rain or similar things it passes through, however, those nearby will feel a slight wind pressure.
Developed when Purge was standing in the middle of a storm during a training mission, he needed to hit 6 rocks thrown up by his teacher without breaking the water around them. [b]Destruction Range:[/b] Small [b]Duration:[/b] Instant [b]Base Stats:[/b]10% first spin,+20% on final strike. Strength and Power [b]Key Traits:[/b] Shokyū iru
I apologize for the delay in getting this checked. I see the iaido inspiration.
